[Date]
VIA EMAIL AND [MAIL]
[Name of counsel or complainant] [Address]
Re: Your letter of [date] concerning [title of item], published [date] at [URL]
Dear [Name]:
We have received your letter of [date] on behalf of [complainant], which asks that we [retract / correct / remove] [describe]. We take accuracy seriously, and we have reviewed the item and its sources in light of your letter.
[Version A: correction made]
We have determined that the statement “[quote]” [was inaccurate / should be clarified] because [reason]. On [date], we [corrected the statement to read “[new text]” / added the following clarification: “[text]”] and noted the correction and its date at the end of the item. A copy of the corrected item is enclosed. We believe the remainder of the item is accurate, for the reasons given below.
[Version B: no correction warranted]
We have concluded that the item is accurate and that no retraction is warranted, for the following reasons:
The statements are fair and accurate reports of official proceedings. The statements you identify report [testimony given under oath before (committee) on (date) / allegations made in (case caption and docket no.) / statements in (agency report)], with attribution to that source. A fair and true report of a legislative, judicial, or other official proceeding is privileged under California Civil Code §47(d), whether or not the underlying statements are true. [Quote the source and the item side by side, or attach a comparison table.]
The statements concern a public figure and a public controversy. [Complainant] [is a public official / holds a senior position at a company that has publicly addressed UAP / has voluntarily spoken publicly on this subject]. A public official or public figure must prove, with “convincing clarity,” that a defendant published a false statement with knowledge of its falsity or reckless disregard of whether it was false. New York Times Co. v. Sullivan, 376 U.S. 254, 279-80, 285-86 (1964). We relied on [sources], and we had and have no reason to doubt the accuracy of our report of them.
Analysis and opinion. The statement “[quote]” is our analysis, based on facts disclosed in the item and in the cited sources, and is not a provably false assertion of fact. Milkovich v. Lorain Journal Co., 497 U.S. 1, 18-21 (1990).
Your letter does not identify a false statement of fact. [Explain why each specific complaint concerns attribution, opinion, or an accurate report, or why the complainant’s own documents support the item.]
Offer to include a response. [Optional:] We will publish, as an addendum to the item, a statement from [complainant] of up to [___] words responding to the allegations reported, if you provide it by [date]. [Or: We have updated the item to note that (complainant) disputes the allegations, as stated in your letter.]
Further proceedings. The item concerns an issue of public interest that Congress has addressed through legislation and public hearings. Any suit based on it would be subject to a special motion to strike under California Code of Civil Procedure §425.16, which provides for an award of attorney’s fees and costs to a prevailing defendant (§425.16(c)(1)). We have preserved the item, its prior versions, and our sources, and we ask that [complainant] preserve all documents relating to the matters discussed in the item.
Nothing in this letter waives any right, privilege, or defense, all of which are reserved.
Sincerely,
[Name, title] [Publisher]
cc: [Counsel] [Insurer, if required]